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Review:momotwins says:
Hey you! I picked this one since it has the least reviews of the stories on your page, but I'm tackling the Life & Biscuits story next because I've always wanted to read that one (seriously, I've had it bookmarked for a while now but haven't gotten around to it yet). It has thousands of reviews though and this only has 8 so I'm giving this one some love first.

Anyway down to business: this is a really well-written piece, and the style you chose for the writing and formatting really enhances it. You can feel her downward spiral and her loose grip on her sanity, hopeful and despairing and lost at the same time. It's very sad. I find myself hoping someone will help her, because she's clearly making poor life choices left to her own devices. Where's her mom? lol.

Here's the only CC I can come up with: in this sentence - his name slapped on a front of another tabloid, you want to say "slapped on the front of" rather than "a front of", for a more natural-sounding idiom. That's it, that's all I've got ;) The rest is great and I can't say anything but good about it. Good flow, good emotions, good description, it's just good stuff! Amazing how you can pull that off in such a small word count. *throws things at you* You are winning.

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