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Review:CherryBoom says:
First of all, it's been a while since I've been so thoroughly entertained by a fanfic. =) This chapter was fresh and fun, and more imporantly it has a very amusing and interesting plot.

Miss Audrey Bellpepper, just wow. What a wonderful and slightly manic character! I bet the Ministry of Magic hasn't seen such a destructive force since Bertha Jorkins. It's going to be fun to read more about her and Percy, since they are so opposite of each other. I love her conspiracy theories and quite unorthodox ways of catching perps. =P

I enjoyed how you staged the chapter to Diagon Alley. I think that the Ministry was supposed to be in Whitehall, but maybe they have made some changes after the war? Oliver Wood trying to hold back Audrey? I'd love to see how he despairs over that impossibility. I love how you included him in this fic.

It's a great beginning for a fic, and this story goes to my favorites. I'm definitely planning to read rest of it tonight. Love it! =)

Author's Response: Haa, the Ministry being located in Diagon Alley was an accident - I completely forgot it was supposed to be in Whitehall. I'm so glad you mentioned that; I went back and corrected it immediately. :)

Bertha Jorkins draws a good comparison. Audrey is half-parody, I'll admit. She's sort of a caricature of the 'quirky girl' trope in fanfic. But I really do enjoy writing her and how she and Percy play off of each other. It's so much fun to write Oliver in this sort of line of work, too, since he's usually (and rightly so) associated just with Quidditch.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!


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