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Review:Mystique says:
Wow.

In such a short amount of words, you've really captured something. I was really drawn into this story and even though it was a really short story, I felt that it worked better as short, rather than having a really long chapter. Although, I really wanted to know what happened last night - I'm thinking that they had a really bad argument.

I've never been in a relationship like James and Gia's, but the type of relationship that James and Gia is in, seems to be really bad for Gia at least. As I was reading the story, I was sort of wishing that James would leave and not come back. But of course he did come back and the circle started all over again. I thought the writing was really beautiful and I could just feel the emotion in it.

I couldn't find any grammatical or spelling errors, its always nice to read a story without mistakes glaring out at you. Also for this being your first story, I was really impressed.

Charlie

Author's Response: You're totally right. It was another really bad argument. Hours of saying exactly what will aggravate the other and making really cruel comments. They both have their insecurities so you can imagine how nasty the argument could potentially be.

Like yourself, I've never been in a relationship like James and Gia's but it sounds toxic for the both of them. I imagine that both of them want it to end and at the same time love each other too much.

I'm really glad you liked it and your review really made my previously crappy day :D. I wanted it to be emotional but not overdramatic or unrealistic. I hope it doesn't sound too unrealistic that she continually sticks with him but I feel like Gia is a character that A) gives as good as she gets and B) feels like she can save the broken James S. Potter because at the end of the day, he's the guy of her dreams. Also, James is the type of guy that manipulates Gia so he builds up her confidence and shatters it again because that's his nature.

I'm rambling :/. Thankyouthankyouthankyou,

peanuts11

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