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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
At first, I was unsure how your title fit with your story, but then as I continued to read, I began to understand more and more just exactly what it meant. How horrid those type of circles are, the ones that keep your emotions locked up and keep giving you hope that isn't needed. I liked that James seemed to be kind of a lost soul, actually they both seemed to be that way, but for James thats a very unusal characterization so it was rather nice to see. The every word counts challenge is rather wonderful and exciting but yet can be hard because how do you sum up all of what you want to say in such few words, but I think you've done a great job of it here! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Your review seriously made my day so thank you so much :D

I know exactly what you mean, I kind of just poured myself into this one-shot where these two rather self-destructive characters are never going to work. It's really sad to see as well. Thanks for noticing the characterisation of James. I kind of had the idea that James was someone who buckled under the pressure of family expectation and wasn't the typical 'jock hero' of my story. So he takes out his feelings of inadequacy on Gia, who is effectively a doormat.

So in a simpler world, they are made for each other and if they weren't flawed they would be perfect but sadly, in my world of fanfiction/reality nothing is black and white.

But seriously, enough of my rambling, thanks for making my day :D

peanuts11 xx

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