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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
HellO!

I'm back, just like I said I'd be! Surprised? I hope so because I'm sort of fangirling all over the place. Anyway, so we're back with Angelina again! Sometimes I get so wrapped up in my love for George, I mean, er, the fantastic writing when we get back to George (Right?) that I sometimes put her from my mind. Not because I don't like her or anything but because I sort of you know, have this huge crush and everything and Angie's not my type.
Onward!
I really liked the beginning of this chapter, it really gave me a feel of how the kids were anticipating/dreading their graduation from Hogwarts. The uncertainty that you've weaved in with all of the characters was really something that I could relate too. Who hasn't felt that way at some point? You're never too sure what might or might not happen and I think Angelina's feelings about it were very well written. Also, I'm not sure why but Alicia's line about things feeling safe and comfortable with a relationship struck a chord in me. I've heard something similar from friends myself so I sort of had to sit back and think about it, since it sort of relates to alot of various things. The fact that Angelina started to think about George in that same way, despite how she obviously feels about him made me sort of uneasy. I had a feeling that the second half when she met him for that little adventure wouldn't go as smoothly as I, as a fangirl, would have liked.
And it didn't! D':
Argh, I thought, for some reason that George would be the one denying his feelings for Angie, not the other way around. I thought that he'd say something along the lines of just being excited and happy for he and Fred (Really liked how he showed her the joke shop by the way) but it was Angie!
Argh! D':
It was a wonderfully written play on emotions too and I could practically feel how awkward it was after Angie put him off. Poor George! Poor me!!!
Hahahaha.
Anyway, I do like that you've started making a contrast between the chapters. George's feelings are brighter while Angelina's are darkening! I thought it was a very interesting way to move the story forward and I can't wait for more! So, I'll be back, fangirling and squealing like the weirdo I am so look forward to that (?)
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Gabbie &hugs.

I'm always surprised and pleased to see your reviews for this story. :) You were my very first WAT fan that I didn't know all that well (at least when you first started reading it), and for that you deserve a golden star or a enormous box of chocolates. I am still very grateful and excited when I log in and see a review from you.

The frustrations my characters were feeling in their regards to studying came almost directly from my own feelings going into finals season in school. The adventure was fun to write -- it wasn't in my original notes for the chapter, and I'm not sure where the idea came from, but I'm glad it worked out as it did.

Huh, it's interesting that you thought George would be the one to deny his feelings. That boy is crazy about her -- we just don't get the oppurtunity to see his thoughts in the Hogwarts era chapters. :P

Thank you as always for your reviews. I hope you enjoy the next chapter. :)
Mel


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