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Review:Rose says:
I really like your fan fic!! It supplies all my Rose/Scorpius feels!! And I feel bad for Frank, he's like super forever alone. But his dad got so hot, am I right or am I like ultra mega hotness right!? Lol too bad there isn't a second Neville. Yeah, too bad Scorpius is a greasy little dirt muffin cuz Tom Felton is pretty hot now too. Anyways sorry for sharing so many feels but yeah your story is pretty great (I liked the part where her cousins like sorta kidnapped her and when she was talking to Frank cuz I like sad him. A lot. I always had a thing for him even when he wasn't that attractive). Yeah anyway time for little bit of constructive criticism;I think maybe you should work on the plot and how they'll all work out, not saying you need to finish it or like completely plot it out but the beginning is sorta confusing and I feel like you kind of forgot about something the backtracked by putting it in there in the wrong place. Yeah I'm kinda confusing, I'm not an expert obviously and just like a readers point of view ( mine not a normal person's though). Haha I wrote a long review I hope you don't think I'm like really creepy but I am so actually that's okay.
-Love Rose (lol that's not actually my first name I wish it was cuz that would be so HP relevant but it's my middle name)
Ps I would put pictures but they were showing up weird so I just deleted them

Author's Response: Hi Rose! (I agree, it would be awesome to actually be named Rose)
First off, I'm super happy you like the fic :)
I feel bad for Frank too, that's why I let him steal Rose's cookies :) Regarding the plot, I do actually have it (mostly) planned out, I think things start coming together more in the next few chapters. Hopefully those chapters can make it more coherent :)

Love long reviews! :D
~ Potterwatch124

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