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Review:lia_2390 says:
Charlie is such a dude! Seriously!

I'm one of those people who finds it hard to capture the male voice adequately, but I find you've done a great job with it. Of course it depends on his personality which I see coming out strongly here. He's a passionate one, your Charlie - with a potty mouth too.

Here I was thinking they woke up in the morning and Charlie just overslept - not that it was three o'clock, jeez! But I like how you incorporated the weather and its effects on the dragons. The entire introduction to the reservation was nicely written with the right amount of description.

I happen to like Gus despite Charlie's bad mood though all that happiness at three in the morning is cause for assault. Gus is probably right as to the reason for that as well :P

Amazing how in-sync Tonks and Charlie's good fortune came about. Definitely a reason for both of them to smile. It was a pleasant surprise to see Tonks at the end of the chapter - for Charlie's sake as well as for ours.


Good job!

Author's Response: Hahhaa Charlie IS such a dude! I actually had SO much more fun writing him than Tonks. Maybe because my fiance is one of four brothers, so I spent so much time around manly men that really have no filter... but Tonks is a bit more of a mystery to me.

Hahah I like Gus to! He seems like that kind of friend you'd just need to have! Re-reading your reviews has made my day ♥ Thank you so much for stopping by with such an awesome exchange review!


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