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Review:shadowycorner says:
Aah, I had to read one more chapter because I really wanted them to meet! And it was so intense.

I really love the way you write and play with words. There were some wonderful lines throughout the chapter that just made me appreciate your use of language a lot. You also portrayed the relationship between mother and son very well. But it pales in comparison to the scene at the end. I don't like Venn all that much after this chapter, because he seems conceited and arrogant, but there's something really interesting about him and he's turning out to be a strong character. I loved how he saw Helena. It was romantic and I'm not too much of a romance person, but I loved this moment! It was great how he saw her as a fragile little bird but then noticed the sense of purpose. There was so much energy between them I can't imagine what you'll do with the rest of their relationship. I'm really excited.

Author's Response: Hello once again :)

I like the Venn-Edeline relationship a lot, especially since it's just the two of them living together since Venn's father passed away. I think that Venn's good qualities probably come from his mother, in many ways. Unfortunately, they don't come up nearly as much as his usual Slytherin sensibilities!

I'm happy he seems strong. That's one thing I wanted to bring out, to make him seem princely even in his imperfections and awkwardness. At this point, though, Helena has the upper hand, or so I think. I would think that Venn would at least find that interesting, or perhaps even a bit attractive.

Thanks for your sweet review! I hope you return again soon to continue the love story :)

Amanda


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