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Review:my_voice_rising says:
Hello, I'm here from the review tag thread. Ohh, I just love Weasley bro-bonding stories. This seems really cute. I can't wait to read!

Your characterization of Percy is spot-on. Absolutely perfect. I love that he refers to it as a "meeting," definitely not a date, and the way his brothers get him so wound-up that he's incapable of articulating himself even though he's very well-spoken. Not to mention that he's referring to Ron by his full name!

And I miss not-movie-Ginny so much! She's so much better in the books, and you've recreated her brilliantly. I love the way she reacts to Percy telling her he has a question to ask; the way she sits down so expectantly. And George's reaction: "Ron, did you know we had a sister?" Ughhh!!! This is too good.

How endearing that they are able to eat together in silence. I liked your explanation of proper date behaviour and how ridiculous it all is. And of course Percy has a cork board with a list of pet peeves that still hangs in his bedroom. Very funny!

I do think that your ending is a tad bit abrupt; very sweet, but I think that we were given the general impression that Percy was extremely uncomfortable to the point of not wanting to spend time with her, and then he suddenly couldn't help but ask her on a date. Maybe if we were given a clearer picture of what convinced him to suddenly change his mind?

All in all though, this is a great story. It's going on my favorites list for sure.

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