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Review:FriendofMolly says:
GinnyPotter,
There's always the future chapters to fill in the blanks. You could have Harry and Ginny tour his properties (as I'm sure he has a few), having him expound on what was in the vaults. I think leaving a lot to our imaginations make the story that much better. Now we'll have to wonder just how the wards were broken? And how could so many DE's be around? I will await your next.
FoM
PS It was good that Kingsley offered the help of a Ministry official. Personally, I think, she only needs help getting there and back. She'll need to do the memory charm herself.
PSS When Hermione apparated Harry and Ron to Diagon Alley you described the feeling of portkey not apparition. Apparating is like being sucked through a hose.

Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback, I'll make sure that I change the feeling that they got during apparition, I got confused with the feeling of portkey's and apparition. Thank you for sticking with the story so far!

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