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Review:The Empress says:
OK... ok. Let me just compose myself here. Wow.
As a twin myself, I relate to what George went through, because I can't even imagine what life would be like if I lost my sister. So reading stories about having lost Fred is hard sometimes. But this - this is amazing. I know it's not easy to write something from so many different points of view. Some people get caught up in repeating the same thoughts over and over but you didn't. The unique and tragic feelings of each character came through clearly and it is beautiful. A realistic view of a close knit family who has lost someone dear to them before their time.
My favorite parts were definitely Bill and Ginny. And Ron. I like the line when Ron says he wants to stay a few more months with George because he's never had to be alone. Like I said, I'm a twin, so I understand that feeling of never being alone. I can't imagine not living with my sister. We even work at the same job! This story felt personal and really reached out to me.
I saw this was featured on TGS, and I'm glad I popped by the read it. Lovely.
~Shiloh

Author's Response: Thank you so much for stopping by, as well for reviewing! I can't imagine what losing my sister would be like, and we're not even twins. So the idea of losing a twin, that person closer to you than anyone, seems so terrible. Bill's was the easiest for me to write, his and Charlie's, and Ginny was the most difficult so I'm really happy you think her section turned out well!

I absolutely didn't want to get repetitive, so thank you for saying that I avoided that!

Thank you again for stopping by and reviewing =)! I am so happy you liked this!

Jami


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