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Review:javct says:
javct45 finally here with your belated review.

This story gives me mixed emotions. On one hand, I'm so happy that there (might) be a wedding and all the characters will be happy (I'm still holding out for that) but at the same time, I'm really upset because it's not going to end happy!

Salazar showed him the Chamber of Secrets? Interesting. I wonder if that will play a larger role later on the in story? hmm. And why the sudden change of heart with Rowena? Seems odd.

I am really enjoying the development of the relationships between the characters.
Can't wait to see what happens next!

Jasmine, x

Author's Response: Hello Jasmine, and thanks for coming by :)

Haha, you sound like some of the other reviewers for this story--wanting to hold onto hope, but also not wanting to hold on too tightly for fear of having those hopes shattered. It sounds awful, but that's exactly what I want at this point in the story, to keep the suspense going :D

The Chamber of Secrets is important in a background sense, as I have it worked out right now. It kind of symbolizes this schism that's been working between Venn and Salazar in terms of their ideology and goals, and how the Ravenclaws fit in with them.

And Rowena! I'm glad you found her comments interesting. They were meant to expose the concern she's been brooding over for several chapters now--she wants Helena to get married, and yet she feels uncertain about giving her daughter away to someone who is related to Salazar and might share his extreme views. She's definitely waffling a bit.

Thanks so much for this lovely review :)

Amanda


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