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Review:shadowycorner says:
Ooh la la, who is that pretty man on the banner and chapter pictures?? -melts- Ahem.

Since I am basically in love with Before They Fall and Jami's writing, and there are no new chapters, I had to go looking for more of your writing. Then I read the summary to this story and bam! I just had to read it. This is brilliant so far, you know? The writing is fresh and easy to sink into. This was special for me to read because I'm having a similar problem in life...long-distance, very different future and possible careers, different directions in life and all that rubbish...and there's this truth that it probably won't last but still you somehow cling to everything until it's not definitely the time...so all of this is somewhat relevant and significant for me. It's so real. I love that they are trying. I know how this ends, and I like Remus/Tonks, but you're making me want these two to stay together forever, too! I'm so torn now. Their relationship is so playful and fresh, I just kept grinning the whole way through the chapter. It's the exciting kind of relationship, the kind people wish to have.

I haven't read much of these two characters, but I'm really excited. Will there be dragons? Oh I love dragons! The way Charlie talked about this being his dream...well no wonder, DRAGONS.

Off to read the next, tap ti dap.

Author's Response: Ahh you are absolutely spoiling me ♥ not that I'm complaining.. ;)!

Dan is in love with these two. I don't LOVE Tonks, but I LOVE Charlie (Charlie Hunnam is the actor I'm using to portray Charlie Weasley -- he's delisous, right?? He's the main actor in this series called Sons of Anarchy where a motorcycle gang runs guns, but are really still awesome people.) Anyway! I wouldn't have started writing this if it wasn't for the gift it challenge for Dan, and now I'm so happy that I did because it's really been fun so far. It will probably end up being 15 chapters, but because it's a short story collection, I may wind up with many more. Whenever Lily and James annoy me, this is where I head ;).

Dragons! Let me tell you, you are going to *LOVE* the next chapter if you like Dragons.. ;).

Thank you again for stopping by and reviewing! I'm so happy I discovered Memory Dust, by the way!

My fiance is in the military, so we've done long distance quite a bit, and it's never EVER easy. But for these two, it's closer to impossible :(. Hopefully by the end of it though I'll be able to leave you with a bittersweet not as opposed to just..er.. bitter ;).

Thanks again, darling ♥


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