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Review:CassiePotter says:
Oh my goodness. I'm not quite sure what to say about this chapter! It was amazing, like your stories always are, and we definitely got a lot more character development for Roxanne and Bejamin. They really are quite a pair. Plus he loves to mess with her, and she's just innocent enough that he can. But I don't doubt that she could hex him senseless if she needed to! I'm a little nervous for her to go home now, though. What is her family going to say when they wake up and she's gone??? I thought the little George/Angie moment was cute, and Ben's tales of Italy have me intrigued! Is the royale coming perhaps? I hope so! I'm not sure what story I'm updating next, but once I figure that out, you'll be the first to know! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hello!

Welcome back! This was the chapter that I'd always wanted to really write but wasn't quite sure how to execute it. Its really not a fluffy chapter, if you were able to guess from that ending! I thought I might have overdid it a little because I was like, "Who am I to write a near-love scene?!" and I just sort of blushed my way through it. See how mature I'm not? Hahaha.
Yep. Roxanne and Benjamin are an interesting duo aren't they? I'm not quite sure what I could say about them, other than they really don't know what to do without one another. On some moments I assumed that they were actually quite close and then Benjamin would mess with Roxanne and I'd doubt myself. Its very hard to get their dynamics! :p
Ah. The going home...well, things won't go very well when she does, I'll just let you know that now. Roxanne is going to be in more than just a little trouble but I think so much is going to be going on that you'll sort of push that out of your mind. Hopefully? Haha.
Oh, yes, there are going to be more George/Angie moments in the future. There's actually quite a bit that Roxanne doesn't even know about her own parents or their relationship and I'll toy around with that later. Hopefully...
More tales of Italy shall be coming from Ben I promise! The Royale will come eventually I promise, I just have to get some other things out of the way. :(
You know what you should update for next? TFD! I'm really curious to see what happens for it! :D
Anyhoo, glad to hear from you! See you on the forums!
Much love,
Gabbie


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