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Review:hushpuppy says:
This doesn't make a whole lot of sense or it's difficult to take seriously. In the first chapter you mention that she was in 5th year when she got pregnant. So this means that they started dating when they were 12 or 13 years old? She had sex for the first time when she was a third year? That's eighth grade in the US, which is pretty early to be getting drunk AND having sex.

Author's Response: They got together when Al was 13 and Flick 12.
They broke up in their 4th year, Al was 15 as was Flick. Then they got back together 2 months later.
An then when they were in 5th year and were both 16 they had sex.

Al and Flick weren't drunk when they did it together but they were when they did it for the 1st time with Nolan and Hattie.

Hope that clears it up a bit.
-Potterfan310

P.s - I know people who had sex for the first when they were 13 and some people who had been smoking since they were 9/10 as well as drinking.



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