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Review:NightStar says:
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AAAH YOU UPDATED!:D

Oh my god, this was GOOD! I really liked it! Researching and all was TOTALLY worth it! It was well-written, a bit monotonous but then again, your story is more of fluff so its alright:)
It was nice to see a good, long chapter :) You should do this more often.

I just have one concern. The story's turning out to be fluff, fluff and fluff. Did you intend to make it like that? Like just a general story with various types of genres and all? I don't mean to be rude! I'm just asking:) The story also seems to be going nowhere. Its just round and round and round. You've been taking it day by day and it seems a bit long but maybe that's just me because I've been waiting for each chapter to be uploaded and all. Don't take me seriously, you're doing an AMAZING job of writing this story. I'm just hoping your plot is strong because you've got a wonderful idea as a beginning and I'd love to see the story grow and bloom :)

All in all, DO WRITE MORE! :D Long chapters are good and don't worry, this chapter wasn't "grueling, boring or just pure unrealistic" xD I actually liked it :D

With loads of love,
~NightStar

Author's Response: Hey Nightstar, good to see you lovely!

And thank you for those kind words! I love how I was able to pull off a well written chapter with the immense research I put it. I aplogise it for being monotonous, but hey, I tried, and I'm pleased so far with all the positive feedback I've been getting.

And as for the story getting no where, the whole thing just started off as spontaneous. It was an idea that pestered me and I really needed to get my creative juices flowing, because it was durring the summer and we were on our summer holidays. No School = Braindead, so I just used this as a little excersise. And then I wanted feed back so I posted it on here. There was no original planout, except for the first four chapters. School's been getting in the way, and so for now, I'm afraid this might have to be put on hold...for a little bit. That way I've had time to extract what I've learned in english class and make this story better. That way I'd also have more time to plan things out properly. I know it seems scatter brained, but this was all for fun and warm-up. No strings attatched, just approached with great gusto.

With loads of returned love,

PhoenixPulse

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