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Review:SydneyBlack says:
It sounds like you've got a good plot going. I'm curious to see what happens next! You should watch your grammer like here:

"Man, I ate so much that if I took a dip in the Lake, I will hit the bottom right away." James groaned as they joined the flow of students exiting the Great Hall.

"We all will." Grace muttered as she rubbed her full stomach. She suspected magic was involved. She literary couldn't stop eating, it was so delicious. They must have put enhancement on the food.

I think it would sound better if it was:
"Man, I ate so much that if I took a dip in the Lake, I would hit the bottom right away." James groaned as they joined the flow of students exiting the Great hall.

"We all would." Grace muttered as she rubbed her full stomach. She suspected magic was involved. She literary couldn't stop eating, it was so delicious. They must have put enhancement on the food.

See what I mean?
Anyway, I'll be adding this to favourites so I won't miss anything! Sirius is my favourite character so I'm enjoying this!

8/10 :)

Author's Response: Hello! First of all, thanks for the review!

I'm posting the new chapter today so expect it soon. I'm so happy you liked it and that you favourited it, it means a lot.

I don't know how I missed that, it's definitely the better option. I've got to go back and check it out but I'll probably have to get a beta because English is not my first language and I'm bound to make mistakes like this or even some more fatal.

Thanks again and I hope you'll like the rest of the story ;**


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