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Review:soufflegirl99 says:
This is such a touching, moving and beautiful one shot. It shows all the different aspects of life, and is so perfectly described with lots of realistic detail and brilliant character development.
I love it - "The soft sound of her laughter met the deep tone of his" and " anger shaking the voice that typically sounded as if it had come straight from an angelís harp." Fantastic!
The mini plot inside the huge plot is amazing, and I think it captures all the different emotions and twists and turns of life wonderfully - covering marriage, death, e.t.c all rounded up in such a lovely one shot.
I like the way you describe Bill and Fleur's relationship - one of the hardest to understand, but you made both their personalities slot together nicely, which is not an easy thing to do.
Well done on such an amazing one shot - certainly brightens up a dull sunday afternoon!!

Author's Response: Hi there! I really have a soft spot for Bill and Fleur. I think that she's such a misunderstood character that doesn't get enough credit for the strong woman she is, so I'm really happy you enjoyed me portrayal of them in this!

Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving this awesome review ♥!

Jami


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