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Review:1917farmgirl says:
So, as a general rule, I don't read many "After Fred Dies" fics. I cried enough the first time it happened; I don't like to relive it over and over again. And I just prefer my twins both alive and making mischief.

I'm glad I made an exception for this story, however, as it was beautifully if heatbreakingly, written.

There's just something that breaks my heart each time I think of the Weasleys all going on, living life, moving forward, and Fred...not. That is exactly the feeling you captured in this story. I know they would learn to go on with life - be happy, learn to live again...but as you expressed so well, it would never be the same again. Not exactly.

You have very descriptive writing with no wasted words. I like that. It's something I struggle with in my own writing and it always makes me rather jealous to find writers who can say things so beautifully without padding in a bunch of extra fluff that's not needed.

Great fic. Congratulations, you should be very proud of it.

Now, please excuse me while I go look for some tissues and have a real cry over Fred...AGAIN.

P.S. I'm sorry this review is so short. Don't take it as a reflection of my reaction to your story, which was supurb. It was just a really, really long day and I'm having trouble stringing two coherent words together at the moment.

Author's Response: Hi there my dear! I am so happy that you made an exception, this review was an awesome way to wake up!

Haha I know the feeling about having trouble stringing words together, and this review was perfect, thank you so much for stopping by ♥

Jami

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