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Review:soufflegirl99 says:
I love the satisfying plot line and the hanging end sentence that leaves the reader unsure.

This story makes you savour every word and finally releases it's grip on the last line. I think it's very clever, and very awesome (as always) with the whole set-out-to-do-something-but-it-didn't-happen-yet-a-better-outcome-came-along is perfect style for a one shot.

The third person works spectacularly well with this, as I think the first person wouldn't have as much as an impact on you.
The name "Eleanor McGrath" is just too totally cool and awesome dude :D

Author's Response: Ahha thank you so much! :D I did want to keep away from the typical reunion scene in the greenhouse and make y'all guess where it was headed, so I'm glad it worked ;)

Ooh thank you! I do love writing one-shots, and would like people to get something from them too - I feel very flattered that you like my style :3

Hehe yes, I do like first person but it would have been a bit too emotionally over-involved; a degree of separation, I think too, works better. And thankyou so much for your lovely review! :D

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