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Review:Icendio Flame says:
If you are not a wizard, though I sincerely hope you are, you definetly have a form of magic within you. I have kept my emotions bottled up over an incident that had happened with a loved one long ago, and haven't told anyone my story. But when I read those words, "Oh, if you were mine", I cried. I cried for my love of someone who was forbidden to be with me, much as Draco and Hermione were forbidden to be with one another. I let out several months of sorrow just by Reading these words. No person has ever been able to coaxe my emotions out into the open. I hope this inspires you to keep on writing. Even now, as I wipe the tears from my eyes as I remember the one I had loved and lost,I am envious of the way you made my emotions run amok, while dear family members have not been able to draw a single word off of my lips. How a complete stranger has been able to do this, I will never know. Do not stop writing, and I hope to see the next chapter very soon. :)

Author's Response: Incendio Flame,

Oh, my dear sweet reviewer... Once in a rare blue moon, someone writes a heart-felt review such as yours that truly touches my heart. I believe you are the 2nd person for this story to render such a personal forbidden experience to me. Others have in another story of mine about the grief of a love lost.

The words, "Oh, if you were mine" were meant to be heart-felt as if merely having this conversation between them... this discussion of the impossible was ripping him in two. I have experienced loss, but not of the forbidden kind. I only imagine this situation and attempt to put it into words. I've never had to actually live it. And so... my heart cries with you.

I know that many who read this story think it sad, but to be able to relate so much goes beyond the norm and into the personal realm that can make reading it downright painful.

It is a sincere compliment that you give me... that my words have evoked such emotion from you. You pen your experience so well. You've done an amazing job keeping yourself together in the aftermath of your pain. You have withheld so much for so long that I think it a good thing that you have finally let it out. There is a such thing as 'a good cry' and you are justified in your loss in doing so.

You are an amazing person with an obviously huge and loving heart to feel so much. It is beautiful and refreshing that people like you exist. It is my hope that you forgive those that broke your heart and understand that there is Someone that has great plans for you and gives you hope and a future... not to harm you.

May you find the person soon that has been praying for someone like you to come along...

With my sincerest heart-felt thank you for your amazingly personal review...

Dark Whisper

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