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Review:SereneChaos says:
Ah! That last line--I loved it! :) My favorite part in this chapter was Jonas' POV--especially the line:

"I watched Julliette as she watched Simon, as he watched Macie, as she watched Teddy , as he watched Joy, and as Joy watched me."

It seems as if you've managed to find yourself a copy of word to use. To avoid these massive spaces between paragraphs for next time (which happens because the advanced editor on HPFF reads Word's 'invisible' codes on paragraph spacing) use the simple editor when copy/pasting your text. The simple editor will remove all the coding from Word, which means that your spacing will be perfect, but you'll have to go back and manually insert the code for italics (which I prefer, since I use fewer italics than paragraphs, lol). If you stick with the advanced editor, I think you would have to preview your chapter, and then try manually removing the excess spaces between paragraphs. I know I sound like a big instruction manual, but the forums and the 'get help' page are both excellent resources for learning about little things like that.

Otherwise though, great chapter! And good luck with your writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the reveiw! I'll remember about the spacing and what not. Thanks for the advice and for reading the chapter! I hope you stick around for the next!

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