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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
*Runs up and taps you on shoulder* Hehe; TAG! :D

Wow. This is a very interesting and very original piece! Never, EVER before have I read something about how Neville wound up staying in the Room of Requirement, so BIG kudos there for originality!

I think your characterization of Amycus was delightfully well-done; although I certainly never liked him, I completely DESPISE him here, which just goes to show how great of a job you did with that!

Everything flowed nicely as well, the description was great, and there weren't any spelling issues either; well done! I did notice two very small grammar issues, but they were really tiny and they didn't affect my understanding of the piece at all.

The first one was here: "Is when you've done somethin' but you gotta prove that you didn't do it?" You don't really need a question mark at the end of that sentence, a period or even an exclamation mark would be better.

The second one: "Theodore hand shook slightly as he made Neville do a cartwheel" Here, there should be an apostrophe and an 's' on the end of Theodore (Theodore's). Like I said, neither of these things are big at all, in fact, they're hardly noticeable... I just thought I'd point them out so you can fix them (in case you hadn't noticed them)! :D

Anyways, amazing job, dear! 10/10!!

Author's Response: Hello again!
Ooh thank you! I'm glad to hear that you think it's original! :D
You don't understand how much I loved to hear that you completely despised Amycus in my story! This makes me so happy! :D
Oh yes, I don't need a question mark and there should be an 's' at the end of Theodore, thank you for pointing that out! :D
Thank you so much for reviewing again! :D

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