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Review:NightStar says:
Hey ;)

First of all, DO THE MARAUDERS AND AVENGERS COME BACK NEXT CHAPTER?
I really am missing them xD

This chapter was alright.. It was a tad bit boring because it seemed very filler-ish. I also think Fury's reasoning for getting the The Golden Trio work with SHIELD should have been a bit more stronger. Also, how does SHIELD know about the wizarding world's existence? It would have been interesting if you would have mentioned that somewhere :)
You could have emphasized on Hill's confusion. I mean the magical world actually exists! She should be quite flummoxed (I'd be THRILLED! :3)
The best part of the chapter definitely has to be the Pirate singing xD. Pure genius! I could totally play out James strutting and walking around speaking like a pirate in my head and the whole scene was hilarious.

Gud werk there matey! 'S could 'ave been better 'hough! Yer doin' well!
Lookin' forwar'd to the nex' chappie, indeed lassie xD


^yeah, that sucked :P
See you soon! and glad to know you haven't forgotten 'Slytherin Much?' ;) xD
But its alright.. Real life IS annoying.. Take your time :)

With loads of re-returned love (xD),
NightStar

Author's Response: NightStar,

Okay, to answer your question, yes. The Mauraders and Avengers ARE coming back the next chapter. So don't fret. Hopefully it won't dissapoint. I've already finished it, but I haven't had the time to actually re-review it so I could post it up. I'm sort of nervous though. Wandlore is confusing, so I just did my best with the topic.

And I'm sorry this chapter wasn't what you expected. Everything was at the spur of the moment, so my ideas were probably all out there. And the vagueness. I apologise. But yes, it was supposed to serve as a filler. And as for Nick knowing about the Wizarding world, he's the only one. I think Fury's very secretive, so it's not something the whole organization knows about. But he has his ways, I suppose. To be honest, it was a spontaneous idea that came to me at the time, and I've hardly thought about it. I mean, I've thought about it before, but thoughts just come and go, if that makes sense.

And as for the whole James mocking Fury scene, I have to say, that was the only part that I had the most fun to write. I mean, I enjoyed writing this chapter, but it was mainly because of the Potter-Weasley kids actually meeting Fury. They're kids, so it only makes sense for them to take things childishly.

And your pirate immitation wasn't that bad. It passed in my book! :)

And I promise you, I really, REALLY do, I will get my arse to read 'Slytherin Much'. I might be able to read a chapter today, but I've got to read my History Textbook and take my online quizzes first. But I promise, I WILL get there.

PhoenixPulse

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