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Review:EverDiggory says:
This was haunting in the oddest way. Especially that last line. Poor Rose! You actually made me dislike Lily so much. I love how Rose is just like her mother when it comes to her academics. I love how Scorpius was, I assume unknowingly, playing the both of them. He really had both girls going, didn't he? Lily was just so perfect and i hated her for that just like Rose did; the way you portrayed the emotions was beyond mind blowing! I felt genuine hatred for a fictional character. I would love, love, love to read a sequel to this, but I bet that would be difficult because it seems to me that you ended it at just the right spot..

I'm always so impressed! Incredible writing my dear!

xx

Ever

Author's Response: Hi Ever! Thanks for stopping by!

Good, haunting is what I was aiming for! :) You're right in that I characterized Rose as Hermione to an obsessive extreme, and that Scorpius was very much unknowingly playing with both Rose's and Lily's hearts. I'm glad the emotion worked and Lily's perfection got under your skin so that you could identify with poor Rose. I don't think a sequel is coming, but I do suppose it would be interesting, huh?

Thanks so much for this lovely review!

Amanda


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