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Review:NightStar says:
Woah woah woah.. Short chapter indeed xD
Left me wanting more :P but well written as always.. And Nick Fury swearing.. Hmm.. You never swear too much in this story and I was surprised xD
Hill was portrayed well.. I can't say much because SHIELD makes just a few appearances in the comics so I have no idea.. And I wonder what the Potters are going to do in the future considering they have nothing to do with this! But I'm pretty sure it's going to be quite interesting to read and see everything unfold later.. As always, love the plot, good work of the characters and well written!

With loads of love,
NightStar

Author's Response: NightStar,

Yesh! I had to make this one short. I didn't know exactly how to expand upon it, so I felt comfortable to leaving it at that. And I'm glad to see it left you wanting more.

And as for our dearest Nick, I felt he had a rather scurvy tongue and course language. His intimidating look sorta gives off the vibe, ya know. Besides, it's what Samuel L. Jackson does best. :)

As for Hill, meh. I'll be honest, I didn't know how to write her, and I was a tad scared at first, but I had too, because she's a character like anyone else. It wouldn't feel right if I left her out. Her character was like a tiny chunk to the puzzle that felt awkward if tossed aside, ya know?

And yeah, about the Potters. I wanted to drag them in. At first it was debatable, but the burning desire to inside me won. I just couldn't say no.

Thank you so much, I want to say, for keeping up with me for so long. And I just want to let you kow, I haven't forgotten about "Slytherin Much". I'll bring myself to read another chapter soon, once I got the time to devote myself towards the story only and devise a lovely review you deserve.

With loads of returned love,

PhoenixPulse

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