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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
Hello there, dear! I'm Jayde, a fellow 'Puff... TAG, you're it! :P

I really, absolutely ADORE this! As you said in your author's note at the beginning, it really did bring out my inner child! I think this was a beautifully-written piece, and a very original idea, too! You're absolutely right, most people wouldn't think that magical children would NEED Fairy Tales, so that made this piece refreshing and cute and sweet and I just want to hug it!

Everything flowed nicely and the spelling and grammar were great, as well as the tone. The only thing I noticed was a tiny little typo at the beginning, in this sentence:

"I think she has more imagination that the rest of the family... " ('That' should be 'than'). That's the only thing I saw, though, and I'm positive that that's just a typo. And it didn't make the sentence hard to read or anything, I just thought I'd let you know! :D

Anyway, GREAT job, dear! I really, really loved this! Well done; 10/10!!

Author's Response: Hello Jayde! First of all, this has nothing to do with your lovely review, but you have a gorgeous name!
Now, onto business! I'm so, so, so immensely glad that you liked this so much! It really was a confidence boost for me! And my goal was reached if you thought back to your childhood while reading this! Lucy is exactly how I was as a child, and it was a really nostalgic piece for me to write. I love that you want to hug this, it would gladly accept your hug!!! :)
I didn't even notice that grammar thing, so I think I will go back and fix it! Thank you for pointing that out!
Wow, 10/10? Really? That's so sweet of you, and I'm glad you think I deserve it! Thank you a million times over for this amazing review!!! And, of course it's wonderful to hear from a fellow Puff!
Cassie :)

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