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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Megthechef!
This was so adorable that I found myself squealing like a school girl several different times.

Your title grabbed me as I just HAD to read about Zabini Manor!

You had me laughing from the start saying that Ginny was trying to kill her with those spike heels. LOL! XD

And "liquid courage" also had me laughing.

I LOVED how the invitation glowed when it was time to go to the party and LOVED the floating trays. Those were wonderful magical elements and very creative.

I also loved how you mentioned that they wanted to throw a party like that as a slap in the face to their parents. You are so right about that and I thought it fit really well. But as Dramione fan, I LOVE the 'other' reason why they had that party... to get her in the same room with Draco. Gah! And then he actually admitted to her. Awe! :D

And I loved the "Looking for someone" conversation they had. (Squeals). And when he touches her back... (squeals again).

And then there was the part when he confessed to Blaise that he was losing his courage. Awe... that was sweet.

And I loved how you mentioned that Harry and Ginny were about to tear the place apart looking for her. So funny and just like them to be very concerned and ready to battle for her.

It was so wonderful that they woke up together. Yes... I can totally see how she would remember that night forever.

Great job, Meg! I hope you win this challenge. It was truly an enjoyable read. I loved it! Great job.

10/10 for squeal factor. :P
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Dark,

Thank you for this kind review. I'm so happy to read that you enjoyed this little one shot. It was fun to write and hopefully something a tad bit out-of-the-ordinary.

I think we have all needed a little "liquid courage" at times. LOL

Hehe... I think having a party like this with all magical folks no matter what blood status would be mortifying to their fathers. I'm not a huge Lucius fan so over course I want to anger him in some way. Haha.

I love writing HP because of the magic. You can do anything and make anything enchanting. I LOVE it!!! Anyway... moving on...

I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece. As I said before, it was fun to write a goofy little piece like this.

Until next time...

Meg


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