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Review:RosieQueen says:
It's Rosie with your requested review! :)

Wow...this was such a powerful piece! Just a one-shot, but it was very emotional and complex! I don't think I could ever write anything like this. The way you managed to enter Rose's thoughts was perfect. The detail shows a lot of hard work, too.

I particularly enjoyed Rose's characterization. I thought her jealousy towards her more popular cousin was conveyed perfectly. And Lily's characterization was wonderfully done too--she seemed a bit naive, unaware of her cousin's feelings.

And the quote you used from the challenge fit very well into the story. :)

Overall, this was a very enjoyable piece. I adore your writing style so much! Keep on writing! :D

~Rosie

Author's Response: Hi Rosie! Thanks for stopping by! :)

I'm so happy that you liked the detail and my attempt to get into Rose's head. Working on character development is one of the things I enjoy most about writing fanfiction, and it's great to hear that you view it as a strength.

It's also lovely to hear that you liked my characterization of both Rose and Lily. I meant for Rose's dark jealousy to be a sort of contrast to Lily's naivety, although both of them share a too-close connection to Scorpius. It just looks different for each girl.

Thanks again for this very sweet review :)

-Amanda


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