Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Owlpost68 says:
Aww, this is very cute. I'm very interested where this story could go :) I did notice a few spelling and grammar errors, the trick with the spelling ones are that they are still words, but just the wrong ones for the sentence. For example you said how the other kids in the orphanage were "resigned to their faith" when I think you meant 'fate' just things like that. I thought this was a great opening though, good job!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! About those spelling and grammar mistakes - I did download a grammar checker and so on, but it wants to fix my spelling of colour and favourite and those, you know? It seems that it's only for American English, so I stopped using it all together. I'll have to find a new one, or a beta. I'll go back and reread it though and fix the mistakes that I see.

Thank you for reviewing!

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 630
Submit Report: