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Review:WhispertheRavenclaw3 says:
(Since my author name is different from my forums username), I'm WhisperThroughtheWind ;)

I really liked this story. I loved the love triangle between the three of them :)

In a way, I feel bad for both Rose and Lily. Rose loves Scorpius, but he chose Lily (tear). And then Lily still goes back to him after he hurts her...(another tear).

I have one question though... when Rose was talking about when winter came and Scorpius stayed inside, he stayed in his bed or on the couch, by the fire in the Slytherin common room. You said Rose is a Gryffindor, so does she assume that that's what Scorpius does in the winter when he stays in the dorm to escape the cold? I know I'm poking at little things, and it's not a bad thing, I'm just curious XD

And I liked how you used your quote. It was so creative.

All in all, great job :)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for coming by to review :)

I'm glad you liked the story! I definitely feel bad for both Lily and Rose, especially since both of them have this unspoken tension (to which Lily is fairly oblivious) over a boy who doesn't seem to really respect either of them.

You've got it right - that's what I meant by the line (or two) that comes right after that paragraph. You might see it if you look again. I'm glad you liked my use of the quote! :)

Thanks for this very kind review! I'm excited to hear the results of the challenge!

-Amanda


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