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Review:Jchrissy says:
Omg. They are so frustrating. They like each other, they want to figure out more about each other, and they are such little brats for not doing something about it!

I really love James and Roxanne and the entire family dynamic that goes on in this story so much. And the fact that this goes around a Hogwarts schedule and them being in HOGWARTS actually matters as opposed to you never once mentioning anything school related, which annoys me.

I love that the discussion about the map and the Chamber of Secrets. Just tying in those things that you kind of assume everyone would know, until you remember that they aren't in Harry Potter world the way we are and don't know every thing. Scorpius's reactions are perfect. Also, because I've already read way ahead... I feel like there's a chapter a while down when Scorpius and Rose are fighting about James, and Rose is telling him what a good person he is and says something like 'you know that map of Al's you thought was so cool? Well it was James's' obviously that's not completely right, but something close. But this chapter they tall him that James took it, so he already know. I could be completely wrong though, I'll point it out while I'm reviewing if i I notice the chapter that I think Rose says that.

And they even get along in this chapter! We're making progress! They may take a while, especially considering it seems like Rose takes after Ron in the relationships area, but they weren't fighting!

Author's Response: Heh, when I first started this story I ended up drawing out class schedules for fifth/sixth years, just so I could make sure I was being consistent and not doing exactly what you mentioned, which tends to really annoy me as well. Come on, guys, Hogwarts is not just a dance party with love triangles. It's actually a school. People go there to learn. Ughhh.

I actually don't think you are completely wrong - oversight on my part when I was editing things around. I've gone and fixed it so it's consistent now - thank you for points it out!

♥ Thank you!

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