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Review:liltinglight says:
Hi! This was hilarious! :)

Okay... thoughts. So, first of all, Albus truly is a prick. Throughout the chapter I experienced this constant sensation of wanting to punch his face. haha. Maybe its because I'm viewing him through Mia's eyes but I didn't see at all how anyone could find him sweet. Oh, and I also loved how you made Albus the player type rather than James. Usually Albus is the sweet one. I liked the change.

Mia is awesome so far.

Rose and Scorpius are adorable. :)

I don't really know a lot about Riley yet but she seems good.

And Fred is... Oh God he's my favorite so far. haha. I literally laughed out loud at this part:
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"There are not going to be any children now," Fred said while shaking his head sadly.



"There was never going to be any children," I said looking at my beyond mental friend.



"Not with that attitude!")

lol.

Looking forward to chapter 2! So I'm going to add another smiley (Because I clearly haven't inserted enough already.)
:)

Author's Response: Thanks :) Yeah, Albus is a sixteen year old boy, they are all like that in a way right? Don't be hating him too much, he will change :) As the story progresses I'll have more on the other characters. I'm glad you like Fred. He was fun to write in this chapter. He's just as weird in chapter two, I promise. The chapter is just about done, I'll post it by the end of the week (hopefully it will validate soon). Thanks for the amazing review !! Also, I love all your smileys :)

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