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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
I have to say, I enjoyed this chapter even more than the first one. My favorite portion was the dialogue at the very end. It was hilarious.

Your characterization of James seems spot on. However, you portrayed Remus a bit differently than he appeared in the books. He really didn't seem to mind that James was about to hex Severus in class. I felt like he should have tried to talk James out of it. Also, I expected Lily to express a bit more anger when Remus admitted that James had asked him to tell her about his exam grades. Her reaction seemed a bit delayed.

Other than that, wonderful job!

Author's Response: Haha yeah I liked writing this one more too ;) The bit between Marlene, Lily, Mary and Dorcas you mean?

Yes I so badly wanted to get James right, it's one of the things I concentrate on. With Remus I think he struggles to control his best friends- and while maybe he should have said something, I think he was more bothered about concentrating on his work at that point.

Yes, Lily's delayed reaction was definitely something I regretted when reading it back again but I wanted to make the bit between her and Remus more lighthearted because she would have been angry with James, not Remus.

Thank you for your review! x


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