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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
First of all, I really enjoyed the short, humorous phrases that you added here and there. They definitely made the chapter more interesting and seemed to capture James and Sirius' personalities perfectly. However, I noticed that Dumbledore's start of term speech was almost identical to that found in one of the books (I don't remember which one). Try to add your own original ideas in Dumbledore's speech. Overall, nice job!

Author's Response: Thankyou :)

Yeah I definitely struggle with writing Dumbledore for sure, but I don't think it was really that essential to the story. I doubt James and Sirius would have listened to the speech much anyway, but if I go back and edit chapters I'll make sure to change that and make it more original.

Thankyou for the constructive critiscism though- it's much better to get stuff like that rather than just an "I like you story" :) x


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