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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
To see a new Snape/Hermione on the recently added list was a treat in itself, but to have one from you immediately meant it would be a great treat, the extra special chocolate sundae. This ship was such a weakness of mine, back in the pre-DH days, and I'm ready to come back to it - canon and all of those inconvenient details aside. ;)

The way that you've set the scene here drew me in right away - in a few paragraphs, you created the American magical world with all the deft that JKR used for Wizarding Britain. I especially liked Hermione's quip about American Magical Security and the way that American wizards and witches don't dress as formally as those in Britain, and the use of the public toilets as an entrance, and all the other little things you slipped into your descriptions. I didn't just see Salem as you've written it - your words actually took me there. Some cannot manage that after many chapters, but you've done so in an extraordinarily short time. Wow!

When Snape said that first line, I had to use all my willpower to keep from bursting into gleeful laughter. It was a perfect line, so like the old Snape of the early books - that sarcastic, swooping bat of a Potions professor. I'm itching to know what happened to him for all those years, and how he's become so... well, to use Hermione's word "smug". It's like he's happy to have been found, particularly by one of the trio, but why? I'm not sure what to think about his mood - first suspicious, then relaxed when he realizes it's Hermione - as well as his lighthearted reactions to her marriage to Ron (or at least her having a child with Ron) and her behaviour toward her. I want to know so much more! That's the problem. :P

I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what you do next with this story. There's so much here that has caught my interest and your style of writing makes for a fantastic read. :D

Author's Response: Violet! I'm so sorry it took me so long to respond. I have a lot of this story planned out but have stalled out on it. Maybe after Rowan and Phoenix is done. If wishes were hippogriffs and all that ;) thank you!

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