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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
I'm so sorry that it has taken me so long to get to your review but I am here now with it!

I can't say that I don't ship Snape/Lily but at the same time I am a major fan of James/Lily. I think its more that I just don't read it much. With this oneshot though, I really felt Lily's pain in not being able to forgive Snape and still be friends with him. I loved the way that you told this oneshot as well. Kind of all mixed up with events but also from her pov was really nice to see as well. This flowed really well for me as well and enjoyed it very much. I think you did a great job making your reader feel bad for Lily and Snape both that they didn't get a happily ever after together. Your ending was great as well, that they were finally able to be together in heaven even though she is still with James. I loved it and thought that it was all really well done from characterization to description! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Hello, and thanks for coming by!

I'm happy that you enjoyed this story! I always try to work very hard on characterization with my stories, and it's great that you understood Lily's pain and felt like she was realistic. I'm also glad that the style worked for you and you liked the flow. Finally, it's good that you liked the ending - I didn't want it to be too perfect, if that makes sense, but I did want to play around with my favorite ship and shoot for a happy(ish) ending.

Thanks so much for this kind review :)

-Amanda

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