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Review:Owlpost68 says:
so, parts of this was really good, and others were very choppy. I really like connor though, he's cute, and I'm wondering if he's a wizard, I mean, I would think they all were considering kol was over and didn't think anything was weird. I really think it's important for this story to have a beta, with an interesting storyline like this you want it as best it can be :) so great start!
Oh, p.s, The diary entries at the beginning, they seem to sort of repeat themselves, so does other parts of the story, like describing what people look like. It's just not really needed too much, and you can fill the space with better things :) k, hope I wasn't too critical or anything lol. Good luck!
P.S yes Moonyxluna is great isn't she?? :D

Author's Response: All will be revealed in the next chapter to whether their magical or not.

You weren't to critcial at all, in fact helpful. I don't really like this chapter because like you said it's choppy. And I'm currently looking for a beta.

Thanks for reviewing all three :D and glad you like it so far.

-Potterfan310


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