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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
Um... wow. *Looks at review counter for this chapter* No reviews? NO reviews?!? WHY are there no reviews for this chapter?!? :O I am appalled! (But I have to admit that the selfish part of me is kinda happy that I get to be the first review for this chapter!! YAY!) :)

I got an ominous feeling with the 'The search for Dominique... had begun' line. It's got me wondering what Harry's up to and where he'll go/what he'll do to try and find Dom. I wonder if his investigation is going to lead to any confusion/false accusations, etc. Oh, I can just imagine the drama now! *Giggles* That probably shouldn't make me as happy as it does!

I think we get a wonderful look into Dom's character here with the conversation about how she didn't really fit in at home. It was a very natural way to accomplish that; Dom actually TELLS the reader her thoughts and feelings, but she does so through a conversation with Ignotus, so it isn't too obvious that that's what's happening. Well done with that! (And with the whole chapter, of course! :P)

And can I just say that I rolled my eyes at Eirene? You've gotta love her, coming in at just the WRONG time with a "Surprise! You're getting married!" :P She's completely clueless to the fact that Ignotus and Dom are starting to have feelings towards each other (or maybe they aren't and I'm just imagining them because that's what my selfish reader's heart wants XD)

Another thought: Ignotus isn't angry with Dom because he knows that his brother was dead before she got there.. but I'm just wondering/slightly nervous about how he'll feel when Cadmus' fate unfolds. *Bites nails furiously*

Amazing chapter, dear! And I need MOAR pleez! ASAP! :)

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