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Review:CherryBoom says:
Hi! I spent better part of an hour writing a super long review and then my browser crashed. So here's a short version of it.

There can never be too many Bill/Fleur stories out there. I'm shipping them hard and reading about them is always a treat. =)

I really liked that Fleur still had her accent and that she was very protective of Gabrielle. But using the unforgivable curses to an abusive muggle is bit harder to believe.

Your characters are very talkative and speak very openly about even the hardest feelings, you know? I wonder if you're a quite open/talkative person as well? I love that dialogue is so easy for you, but it would be fun to see more description and non-verbal communication.

You have an excellent affinity to make your readers feel every emotion your characters go through. It's one of your biggest strengths as an author. =)

There was some typos here and there, but it didn't affect too much to my reading experience.

It was a great read all in all. =)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this wonderful review! It put a huge smile on my face!! This piece could use some polishing up, though. I will get around to editing it one of these days...

Jami


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