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Review:Jchrissy says:
I see someone took enough chemistry to actually create an amazing and believable potion... Or do we need to discuss the possibility of market on your arm not actually being marker?! Dun dun dun!

Snape, Avery, Wilkies, Lucius oh my!! Seriously, every DE section was great and very realistic. Lucius has some serious nerve, doesn't he?

I just remembered again what happens to
Dorcas in canon, and it really depressed me because I starting to love these two as a ship :(;(.

You give the perfect amount of detail without there being too much. You set the scene then let your characters take over. It's perfect!

You are really making this an addicting story, Pix.

And now where oh where is Severus off to?!

Author's Response: Hi there!

What? That? Oh, that's, umm...grease. Yeah, grease from oiling my, umm... my bicycle chain this morning. Yeah...

Lucius DOES have a lot of nerve. And other things that make him perfect for his role. And if he continues to give Severus tips on hair care, then we're all good.

You've ALREADY bought into the ship?? Holy Mother of Squirrel, it's only chapter three! You get a free t-shirt! :P

Aww, thanks for enjoying the story. I love hearing your thoughts along the way!

pix


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