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Review:Jchrissy says:
Why are you making me like him?? Why?? I swear, between you and Jane I may actually one day enjoy Snape in a story. As long as he isn't with Lily.

At a bar, head down... he just felt so defeated here. Snape is never defeated. Why are you defeating him? I know why. Because it's brilliant. Because you are already showing new colors that are making me not think he's such a slimy slime anymore. Well, that's definitely a plus. Because I am loving this story and I think feeling sympathetic towards one of the main characters and not hating is probably best.

Moody! Ahhh, can I love you forever for including him? I feel like so many stories that take place in this era forget about him. You didn't! And all of your dialogue scenes are so natural! It makes the discussions a million times better to read.

Snape wants them to pay for what he did. Not because of this ancient unrequited Lily love. Can I bow down to you? Because I seriously love you at this point.

I also really love that you've included what he was working on, it was so creative and just took this chapter one step deeper.

Okay. Fine. I love it. I'm here - I'm a Snorcas fan.. You win this round Pixp.. and as long as there are no Lily and Snape reunited moments.. you just may have me hooked. You are a very smooth and talented writer who has captured the ability to truly bring life into characters. Amazing job, darling ♥

Author's Response: Aww, another Snorcas shipper! I love you!!

You won't find any Snilly in this fic, I promise. That's not what this story is about. In fact, I don't mind repeating myself when I say that I believe the character of Severus Snape is too complex to be shaped by a single event in his life. There had to be layers, and this is my attempt to give him some. (That doesn't mean that he won't think about her from time to time - she was definitely someone who shaped him, so I couldn't exclude her completely from the story). And yeah, it's amazing what a shower and a little shampoo can do. :P

Moody was so fun to include in this story! I really enjoyed writing him. And thanks for the dialogue compliments! They are sometimes hard to wrangle. I did my best.

Usually, it takes people about four or five chapters to really get into this story, but if I've gotten you at two, I won't complain! :)

Yay! It's another reader!


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