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Review:atellam says:

James is delicious. (Although I'm sure I've mentioned that before.)

This was wonderful and I loved that Peter was included. The confrontation with Severus (to me, anyway) tied in nicely from the previous chapter. All in all, it was great to see more into James and Lily's relationship, particularly that it wasn't always perfect.

While I certainly am not a Snape fan, I liked how you wrote him here. It gave his character more depth and I enjoyed it more than I thought I would.

Anywho, another marvelous chapter, Branwen, and I can't wait for the next update. (Hopefully I won't miss it like I did these two D:)

Adele :)

P.S. I just realised how lousy this review is, but I really can't say anything other than I love James and Lily like it's nobody's business, so I suppose I'll just leave it at that and hope you forgive me.

Author's Response: You have, I think, but strangely I don't tire of hearing it! :P And don't be silly about your review being lousy - nothing you do is lousy. ♥ I'm just glad you like the story so much!

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