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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Meg,

Ah... I love this chapter. Why? Because she seems to be coming out of her depression slowly and I think you are showing this to us in such a beautiful, subtle way.

I love that he is witnessing her slight smiles and that you are telling us through your words that she is anticipating and looking forward to living and doing something with him. I'm finding it so very sweet.

And him being all frazzled is just adorable.

And not to mention that spark that they both felt in taking each others hands. Awe...

She seems happier and it is so very lovely to read.

Great job!
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Dark,

Thank you for taking the time to review this chapter. I always love hearing your thought on this story.

I'm happy to finally being in the position to bring her out of her slump. Hermione deserves all the happiness in the world. It will be uphill from here though there may or may not be a few more bumps along the way.

I really enjoyed writing this chapter even if it was short because it really sets the ball rolling for the rest of the story so I'm glad found it enjoyable and you really picked up on the few key parts of this chapter.

And Spark is a good thing. :)

Until next time...

Meg

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