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Review:megthechef43 says:
Dark,

I had to fight the tears for the entire chapter. Draco is so sad and lonely. I wish he would just speak out and let her know that he still loves her and wants he in his life.

The conversation with his mother was heartwenching. I was hoping she would answer though I knew she wouldn't but Draco just needs an ounce of comfort on the darkest day. The graveyard was the perfect opening scene for such a strong emotional chapter. I love the part about the confort his mother would bring him as a child. If only it were that simply now.

I think Draco reaction in the court room is well written. I think I like Draco's prayer the best and the little background story dealing with his first miracle. I wonder what Hermione is truly thinking and why she is going through with the divorce. Hmm...

Blaise is playing his part perfectly by helping Draco get up and go to his court date. I smiled when he mentioned "liquid candy. I truly hate that stuff myself.

I'll be reading on... 10/10

Meg

Author's Response: Meg,

This chapter was really emotional for me to even write. Again, because much of what Draco said to his mother mirrored my darkest days. Her leaving him felt worse than death because it was her choice to leave. Oh, the pain. It is a different kind of grief, but grief nonetheless.

He truly wanted to hear from his mother... some sort of advice that did not come. Her touch comforted him as a child and will be important to him for the rest of his life.

I think you might be the first reviewer to mention his little prayer in the courtroom. It is great and terrible things that have a way of bringing us to our knees praying for a way out or at the very least, strength to endure it.

All that Hermione is thinking comes about in the next chapter.

Blaise is such a loyal friend that I imagine him to be there for Draco no matter what is happening. No matter if Draco is doing something right or wrong, he would be there through the thick of it... at his wedding and his divorce. And I put a bit of myself in him as well. I can't stand coffee, tea, or 'liquid candy.' LOL!

Thank you so much for your wonderful reviews and your 10/10. I hope you continued with the story as it does get a bit lighter.

A very heart-felt thank you...
Dark Whisper

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