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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
Oh my goodness, Sarah!

What a perfectly sweet and lovely story. The relationship between Hesper and Florean is so romantic...

See what I did there?? ;)

Now seriously, this is a delightfully creepy, beautifully written look into an absolutely repugnant character. The way he gazes through those yellow blinds, the way he associated his ice cream with himself... his odd sense of self entitlement... it's all so wretched, but so, so well done.

Him following her, and the vision he has, of another girls face... left me with the creepy crawly chills. and the second to last paragraph... omg. crey. So now it's storming and I'm home alone with this one shot, so I'm going to call this review quits. I hope you got a laugh out of the opening of this review, and know that I really do admire you ability to write so many different things. This was a fantastic one shot.

Well done!

Author's Response: SNORT SNORT SNORT.

♥ omg I love you, woman. Also pretty sure I almost had an aneurysm but that was resolved quickly. XD

Dude, Florean in this fic makes me so squicky, I just. Ew. When Marina posted this challenge about dark/horror, I think a lot of people's minds went to Voldemort, to Death Eaters, to Dark creatures and the like. But what frightens me the most are the /real/ beasts, the nightmares like Florean who are hiding behind a smile and a bowl of ice cream, always watching. -shudder-

LOL STORMING AND ALONE. PERFECT CHOICE FOR READING, MEL. ♥

Eternal loff~

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