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Review:Erised says:
Oh goodness. This was so full of emotion, it literally poured from it! The love triangle, or even square was just incredibly done and it made me really root for Molly and Teddy (which is a super unusual pairing which is awesome).

The fact that Victoire and Teddy eloped seemed to me as a point of Victoire trying to get one up on Molly and showed the rivalry between women in general, especially those who are related/friends. Excellent work here on showing the complexities between human relationships.

I think Molly was my favourite character in this for definite. Even though she was getting married she seemed to sad throughout the whole thing, and your detail of her childhood was just too cute. I really loved reading it. Her little scene with Teddy really added more depth to her character also and made her more dimensional, which is great to see.

Lovely work here :)

Author's Response: I was blown away to see the two review that you left for me during the review-a-thon yesterday. Thank you so, so much.

This story was something I was once very proud of, so thank you for reminding me that it existed (if that makes any sense... you know how sometimes you can forget about older oneshots?) I'm glad you enjoyed the twisted relationships here.

Thank you again,
Melissa


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