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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
For a first one-shot, you did really well! I mean, I enjoyed it and all. I really like how there's two POV, and it wasn't confusing at all.

I really like how James was being all 'lazy' to Lily's POV, but to Jame he was just being...'observant'. That was pretty cool. Getting to see their views on each other! :D

You should totally write more fluffy little one-shots. Perhaps, a sequel to this one? Where they kiss? ;)

Anywho, great story! Totally enjoyed it!

Slytherin For The House Cup 2012,
Izzy xx

Author's Response: Thanks! I think I could have made it better, just because I wrote this a while ago, but I felt like putting it up as is.

I had fun with the different POVs. It's something that I've always been interested, you know? It's all in the perspective :D

Yeah, I think I will write some more fluffy one-shots. Perhaps a sequel. We'll see.

Thank you for the lovely review ♥


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