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Review:accioHPFF says:
Wow. This was written really well!

I've never read a BloodyBaron/GreyLady story, but I loved this! I really liked the way you told the story! Although initially I did wonder how you would manage to tell the whole story in one chapter, I think you did it brilliantly, and it flowed at just the right pace.

The dialogue between the two at the end was also really well written, and I think it was particularly fitting to a story in this era; it reminded me that this did happen a long time ago.

The final section was so effective in drawing the story together. I love how you died Helena's death with her mother's, and the section about the "cloudy grey colour" was also superb. The last line... I don't know what to say, except that I think it is possibly the perfect way to end the story.

Great job!

REVIEWED FOR THE HOUSE CUP 2012 COMPETITION.

Author's Response: e! I'm so glad you liked it! It was a bit of a beast for one chapter, but i cut out a lot... I'm happy that the old-fahionedness was apparent, i wasn't sure how to convey that without sounding stupid, so i'm glad it worked out.
thank you so much for your review and input, it's very appreciated :D
~Gill


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