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Review:Deltaris says:
The thought of Neville following in his parents' footstepts and becoming and Auror is great. It is something that I can see him doing, as he really flourished in leading the DA during the Trio's absense. I do like how you included his affinity for herbology in among this as well, though :)

The line 'After a Horcrux, this ought to be a cinch' made me giggle. I really like how you have Neville reverting to his insecurity in himself, and then this. He is amazing, he just doesn't always realize that, and you show that perfectly.

Neville's use of the Imperius curse shocked me, to be honest. I think you went about it wonderfully, though. He spoke it without thinking, without really choosing to do so, and you really show that with how he recognizes that it was a foreign feeling for him.

Haha, oh my gosh. I can only imagine the look on Ron's face after Neville tells him it's a bunch of spiders.

I didn't realize the summary before your note. It was really ingenius of you to incorporate that into the story the way that you did!

Congrats on winning best overall, you really deserve it, this piece is amazing!

Del<3
Hufflepuff

Author's Response: Hi there! Neville's Auror days is canon. ;) He was an Auror with Ron and Harry after school for a little while before he went on to be an Herbology professor, so that's why I used that here.

Neville's use of the Imperius curse shocked a lot of people! I'm surprised at that, I must say. Not to refute anyone's opinions, but all he did was make a dragon go to sleep. That and it was done to fulfill a prompt. But yeah, if I were writing this as something really serious and not hypothetical or anything, I probably wouldn't have made him do that.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!


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